It this true, are you the one who made the manga or is it your Twin brother who did it? or is it the both of you who did it together?
anyways, if you did I like to say great job, you were able to put your manga in the actual manga internet, you even made your cover look like an actually manga cover & I read your manga from 1-9 pages.
when I saw your manga on the actual manga internet I was so surprise & impress with your work I mean your just like me & my Twin sister who were also working on a manga story too.
I mean working on our very own manga story is our life long dream in fact That's what I said to "My How To Draw Manga Book Collection" picture right here in this link ([link]) this will take you what I mean about full filling our dream to become manga artists
And do your best to make your Manga better & hope your manga dream will soon come true too just like us